You’ve touched my soul
Always in control
Our minds entwined
And eyes were blind
Sands of time
We don’t really mind
Our hearts desire
We always find
Every inch of me belongs to you
As you’re to me, I hope you do
Now I can’t feel what used to be
Her love took you, with her you flee…
Written for A to Z Challenge April 2016
erhynireh 
Interesting word to start the A to Z challenge. Nice piece of poetry, also your photo is that what they call a Bleeding Rose?
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Yes, I always find red rose an epitome of deep and profound emotion. Bleeding rose denotes too much pain. I’m glad you appreciate it. Next is Bedazzled…
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This is a lovely post to start your morning with! Loved this the most:
Every inch of me belongs to you
As you’re to me, I hope you do
Now I can’t feel what used to be
Her love took you, with her you flee…
Looking forward to read more from you.
Ashmita Chatterjee,
(Chaoticsoulzzz)
https://chaoticsoulzzz.wordpress.com/
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Your comment inspired me to strive for more. I appreciate it. Thank you!
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🙂 Please do check out my post as well…
Ashmita Chatterjee,
(Chaoticsoulzzz)
https://chaoticsoulzzz.wordpress.com/
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I sure will
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Lovely words to start your challenge in April.
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I always feel a sense of release every time I write a piece of poetry. I’ve never been this free. Thank you Miriam!
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Good Morning, that is a very sad but beautiful poem. A great start to A-Z. I think maybe next year I combine A-Z and NaPoWriMo :-). You just gave me the idea 🙂
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I’m glad you appreciate it. Good endeavor for next year indeed!
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Wonderful start!
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Maybe I’m inspired? Thank you!
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Wow, so much talent in just a few words! Loved it.
Enjoy the A-to-Z, my friend!
Cherdo
Cherdo on the Flipside
“Favorite Characters, Favorite Lines” on the A-to-Z Challenge 2016
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Thank you for your kind words dear! Heading now to check yours.
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What lovely verses and the rose expresses it all pictorially!
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Oh thank you! I’m glad I was able to give justice to my work.
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